改错
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加出加一个漏字(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties.The main problem was in that I
always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese.My teacher advised me to keep
diaries.I followed her advices.Happily it worked.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was
learning to express me in simple English.One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher.She
liked it very much that she read it to the class.Everyone said the story was the good one.I was great
encouraged by their words.
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