短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作

题目：

短文改错。

     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mary,

     I am Senior 3 student. I'm going to take part in this summer's college entrance examination.

In preparation for it, I am studying very hard. As a result, I often feel exhausting both physically

and mentally. Therefore, my parents still put a lot of pressure to me. I know they have great

expectations for me, but I feel the pressure is too heavy for me not to cope with. I attempted to

communicating with them, but failed.

     Now I quite upset about it. How can my parents understand us? I really don't know how to

do. Could you please give me some advices?

     Looking forward to your reply.

                                                                                                                            Yours,

                                                                                                                            Li Hua