第二卷 写作（共两节，满分35分） 第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满

题目：

第二卷

写作（共两节，满分35分）

第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断。每行均有一个错误，请按以下情况进行改正：

该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线（﹨）划掉； 

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词； 

该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

Dear Tracy,

Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats              76._______

me as a carelessly child. He doesn’t value my opinions.           77._______    

He is very strict in me and often punishes me for                78 _______  

leaving things lying around in the house when he did this         79._______        

all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to               80._______    

follow. But he often says: “Doing as I say, not as I do.”          81._______        

Even more worse, he points out my past mistakes to guests,      82._______           

making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t            83._______          

bear how he does. I have tried many times to talk              84._______      

with him but he never listen. Please, help me.                 85._______                         

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