改错题。Dear Alice, I have just got some go

Dear Alice,
     I have just got some good mews to tell to you.
I win a national prize for painting last week.
My father was so pleasing that he suggested
I go to England for a holiday. I'd like to staying 
there for half a month, visiting place of interest
or practicing my English as well. We've been
writing to each for nearly a year now. I have
often dreamed of talk face to with you.
I imagine you'll be at vacation yourself by that 
Time. Perhaps we could go out to doing some
sightseeing together.

                                                           Best,
                                                            Lily